A flat five, the coldest night
and in the black beyond
the house, three owls.
Is there a reward
for hope?
Or is necessity
a mother?
I do like the answer,
here, have an owl,
have owls, have
stars, have cold air
to see your breath,
it’s not much
but it is everything.
This is lovely, and I love the way the speaker comes into it – mid-poem, a casual theatre-goer admiring the way the effect is achieved.
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Thank you for your kind words — if you replace theatre-goer with poet, a fairly apt description of my usual writing process :p
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I think those last two lines are the perfect short review of any book of poems–“It’s not much. But it’s everything.” Great work.
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Thanks, Jeff!
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Quite lovely.
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Thank you!
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thanks!
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This is beautiful. You described the night in a very different way. I like your perspective. Great writing 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words!
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natch-ending
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