January 22

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[Posthumous]

Lilac streaks this sunrise
against the dusky mountain

the floor moves on
with plans for discharge

or work for the M.E.
it does get lighter

earlier now
I panic in traffic

thinking I’m late
staring at the mountain

and what does late
even mean

if not that we take
so much for granted

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  1. thelumberingliger's avatar

    Hi, just found your blog and love how your poetry is so minimal and yet (or, perhaps, therefore) so effective! Those last two lines ring so true for me. I don’t even know if you meant it that way, but I am perpetually late and always regret it. On the one hand that means I am taking a lot for granted – like others’ time and patience and forgiveness. But of course, on another level, the constructs of time and lateness seem so natural to us, while the more I think about them, the less clear and comprehensible they become…

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    • C's avatar

      Thanks for reading and for commenting! We do kind of cling to the constructs of time and lateness. We also refer to the deceased as “the late” so and so… not very clear or comprehensible, either

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