March 8

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Everything is more these days
thank god the sky is staying

blue
now perforated

by baby jays learning how
to jay the world

a cacophony of birds
a shadow

in the underbrush
apostrophated

bark
towhee nuthatch

I don’t miss much
and there are starlings

gone to rob a nest
everything is more

these days
the less

is so much
less

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  1. camillae's avatar

    Hmm, this is lovely. The choppy perforation of the lines is perfect, the inclusion of the word itself a clue – and indeed the other grammatical hints (eg. apostrophe). I particularly admire the ending, it’s like someone haphazardly tripping down steps, a few at a time.

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    • C's avatar

      haphazardly tripping down steps, a few at a time… that sums up so much, so perfectly 🙂

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