June 3

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Does this feel like water? Overflowing
banks, a drought, both demonstrate
a marked loss of control–

Or, the ghost of steam, water giving up
its form to take on another, but still
remaining water–

(maybe fire then is more apt–
it isn’t, then it is, until
it burns itself out.)

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  1. miriammendoza210's avatar

    Nice-I like your use of dashes. That’s very Dickinson of you.
    I recently made a page myself, and I’m planning on doing poetry.
    Maybe you can check mine out when I get around to actually writing and/or publishing my work. Thanks for sharing~

    M

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