I had hoped to watch the sky
fill in with stars, particularly
the obscure ones
reserved for the backcountry
but fell asleep too early,
having spent all night waiting
for night to fall. Even late,
the mountains glowed,
echoing the Northern sun
ringing out across the old
burn zone, new brush rallying
up dry avalanche chutes–
so very little snow this year.
Slowly, the lake receded
into suggestion; an owl
called lowly, both begging
the question. To have
is the first true
prerequisite for want.
The second,
loss.
I saw three stars only
before I slept,
but at three, woke
to a cacophony of light–
the nearly-full moon,
a host of constellations,
such a loud, glad return,
and almost making
an absence tolerable–
its a nice poetry though…
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thanks!
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Nice one. great expressions..
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thank you!
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That was brilliant! The stars and cacophony ending were wonderful!
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Thanks, Dharmesh!
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I totally love your poems…they’re truly breathtaking. I’m just getting started maybe you could come over to my page. It would mean a lot if you as such a talented person could do that. Keep going because I’m not the only one enjoying your posts ❤
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Thanks, Maki! You have a great start on your blog
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Good poem..good feel..
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Thanks!
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