1.
When we are far apart
I carry you around
like an ache in my bones–
bright as the promise
of rain ringing out
in the callus
of a long-healed
fracture.
2.
When we are far apart
I think of you so often
that my other thoughts
cast shadows–
3.
Also
when we’re together.
this is beautiful ❤
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Thanks, Amber!
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“my other thoughts cast shadows” that caught me. Keep writing, keep the pen alive.
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I was a little worried that line was too obscure, but couldn’t think of any other way to say it. Glad it resonated with you!
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I feel the same way with most of my poems so I end up not publishing them thinking people may not relate with it. At least I know I’m not the only one
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When we are together… beautiful!
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I felt emotions through your words! Amazing.
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Thanks!
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Innocence of above lines are lovely , I like it as always
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Thank you!
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If you agree then you are beautiful from heart
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Mmh. This took my breath away. Too relatable. Very well done.
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Thanks, Addison!
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Beautiful and simple x
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Thank you!
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