Afternoon as threshold,
precipice. Mid-week,
mid-month, equipoise
and the cry of a woodpecker.
They say the snow’s
all done, and now
that it’s light
later we hacked
back the blueberries
that won’t produce,
severely,
taking them down
to the ground,
provoking life
from dormancy,
or: hoping.
An hour later, still,
shears in hand
going at spouts
and suckers
in the bay laurel,
getting dark out,
and cold, still,
to bring order!
An evening act,
as suburb lights
like unblinking eyes
go on one after another
As always, your images and spareness are just right. Your words are breathing, even though I feel breathless at the end. Potent and tender, soft and strong. And the line breaks work so well. Wow.
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