First seen from afar
bas relief of steel
the edges of Manhattan
and proof that it does end
and one hot train from Newark
is how it begins
a car on its rails
a needle in its groove
a burst of static
and the track starts to play
First seen from afar
bas relief of steel
the edges of Manhattan
and proof that it does end
and one hot train from Newark
is how it begins
a car on its rails
a needle in its groove
a burst of static
and the track starts to play
Lovely. Precise. Really hits home in less words than I am writing now! As a poem should do.
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Thank you!
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Well done. It has that NY/NJ feel.
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Thanks! First time in NY/NJ, but I think I
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… like that feel 🙂
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