Last night finding
Jupiter with the telescope
its variable moons
like hesitations,
state a thing
and the assumption
is it is just what
was said–
No. What else is behind
the bright bold object?
Quails in the tall grass
a plume of dust when they alight
late heat and altocumulus
the changing of hours
kicks up a breeze
two hawks pass high
in a straight line
did the sky move
or did I?
Question the vector
superb
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Nice one!! ❤
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That vector never replies.
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Nope!
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Beautiful work. I love your descriptions.
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Thank you!
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Beyond words …. Beautiful.
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Great work, full of imagery! Would you consider entering my poetry competition on ikwilliamspoetry.wordpress.com?
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Well done
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