Everything is more these days
thank god the sky is staying
blue
now perforated
by baby jays learning how
to jay the world
a cacophony of birds
a shadow
in the underbrush
apostrophated
bark
towhee nuthatch
I don’t miss much
and there are starlings
gone to rob a nest
everything is more
these days
the less
is so much
less
Beautifully written! Great rhythm.
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Thank you!
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towhee
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towhee?
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towhee nuthatch –– that’s great
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Ah. Thanks!
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Hmm, this is lovely. The choppy perforation of the lines is perfect, the inclusion of the word itself a clue – and indeed the other grammatical hints (eg. apostrophe). I particularly admire the ending, it’s like someone haphazardly tripping down steps, a few at a time.
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haphazardly tripping down steps, a few at a time… that sums up so much, so perfectly 🙂
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sparrow-echo, when there are no walls
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