A leave-taking
still
I’ll see
these yellow doors
again but it won’t
be this me
hardly a loss
so why
this longing
for lasting?
.
All the seeds
we planted
are coming up
distinctive
seed leaves
true to type
and rain
this weekend–
progress
as planned
.
Is this the way
it goes for blossoms
that fall off
of nascent fruits
false starts
that only thought
they were
the thing
.
Or is this just
more structure
xylem and phloem
just how much
preparation
is required
before something
can happen?
.
Oh harbingers
are tricky–
to know
but not know what
.
and much more
so now
with such a wilted faith
in when
This is wonderful š
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Lovely š
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My wife and I planted three seeds and watched them grow. They rooted well, strong, their roots firm in the earth and yet they have flowers and yearn for the sun and light. Deep in the soil where the earth natures them and reaching for the sun during the day and the stars at night for guidance.
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growing plants from seed is so gratifying, or inspiring…that a whole garden can come from just a handful of dry seeds still amazes me year after year
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Yep, harbingers are tricky all right.
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I love “so why / this longing / for lasting?” That, and just plain the idea of narrative at all, are at the heart of so much that is troubling. The harbinger does not know it is the harbinger. They were the thing and not the harbinger at their moment. In the process of things, they were more than signs to be read.
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unwitting harbingers… now there’s an idea to revisit!
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I really like the judgement on enjambment you use here! It gives the poem a much stronger feel š
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Thanks! It’s been hit or miss but seems to be coming more naturally these days
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Amazing
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